Need a new perspective on your novel? I hold an MFA in writing from Vermont College of Fine Arts, and am adjunct faculty in Western Connecticut State University’s low-residency MFA program in writing. I love to analyze manuscripts regarding structure, plot, pacing, setting, dialogue, story arc, point of view, characters’ motivations, etc. I pay attention to the way you choose to engage readers (where do you invite readers to enter into the story you’re telling?), and the way you move your protagonist from chapter one to an ending that resonates or feels satisfying or somehow works.
I do not handle line editing or proofreading. During a big-picture read-through, if I see problems related to the basics of grammar or style, I might comment on a few fundamentals of the craft. But you can fix them later. The more pressing questions about your manuscript (such as the clarity of your characters’ desires and the sequence of scenes) are the ones that interest me most.
My rates to review manuscripts are based on the number of pages you send. For more information, please email me at ABWestrick (at) gmail (dot) com.
What clients are saying:
Your analysis is pure gold! I can’t tell you how inspired I am by your comments. I appreciate your ability to make concrete much of what I’d sensed was wrong with the draft but hadn’t been able to articulate.
I’ve read thru your feedback, twice. Very astute. Well done! … Thanks for giving me the salient features to rally around… I shared your detailed critique with 2 of my readers last night. And we all agreed what a fantastic, detailed job you did!
Denis Jay Klein
Since I consider Brotherhood to be an exemplary historical novel, I tried Anne’s editing services. She emailed a series of suggestions for ways that I might revise my uninspired opening, then gave freely of her time during a personal meeting to discuss her comments. Very pleased with her dedication.